Kommentit: 

1. Kappale 4, sivu 1: 

"The department is made up of five areas of specialisation:
Algorithms, Intelligent systems, Software engineering,
Information systems and Distributed systems and data
communication. The last two specialisation areas have been
introduced since 1998."

Opettajalinja ja sovelluslinja puuttuvat.

Korjausehdotus:

"The degree programme in Computer Science is divided into three
subprogrammes: Computer Science, Applied Computer Science, and
Teacher in Computer Science. Computer Science, which is the area
largest in volume and which focuses both on practical and
theoretical studies, is further divided into five specialisation
areas:  Algorithms, Intelligent systems, Software engineering,
Information systems and Distributed systems and data
communication. The last two specialisation areas have been
introduced since 1998."

2. Kapale 4, sivu 2:

"The University of Helsinki has been successful in attracting
female students. The average proportion of female students in
other institutions in the field has remained close to 10 %
whilst at HU the figure is 20 %. However the department is not
as successful when measured on female students who go on to
complete their studies and graduate."

Naisten osuus valmistuneista ei ole pienempi kuin naisten osuus
kaikista opiskelijoista. Vuonna 1998 valmistuneista 27% oli
naisia, vuonna 1999 24%. (Ongelma on, että naiset keskeyttävät
samassa määrässä kuin miehet.)

Korjausehdotus: Jätetään viimeinen lause pois?

"The University of Helsinki has been successful in attracting
female students. The average proportion of female students in
other institutions in the field has remained close to 10 %
whilst at HU the figure is 20 %."

3. Viimeinen kappale, sivu 2: 

Limited industry links

"The department has only limited co-operation with the industry.
Almost all thesis work are prepared according to the students'
own interest. Department has some grants available for those
students wishing to focus on basic research, instead of focusing
on applied research, which is more readily funded by industry.
The evaluation team felt that the research and teaching at the
Helsinki University is more "academic" in that sense that it is
rather independent from the influence of industry and commerce.
Most visible industry co-operation is limited to a dual
professorship, one person working half time at the department
and the other half in the industry."

Opinnäytteitä tehtiin joko teollisuuden tai jonkun muun
laitoksen "toimeksiantona" seuraavasti: pro graduja 42%,
ohjelmistotuotanotöitä 50%.

Tutkimusprojekteilla on hyvät yhteydet teollisuuteen. Meillä oli
vuonna 1998 47 yritystä mukana *rahoittamassa* tutkimusta.

Korjaus?

4. Kappale 4, sivu 3

"International activities are limited to a couple of research
projects. Greater emphasis should be placed on students'
internationalisation. Only 2-3 students take part into exchange
programmes annually. This is due, in part, to the fact that so
many students also have part-time employment. It is recommended
that the programme staff give additional recognition to student
participation in international activities. "

Tässä on tapahtunut virhe. Vaihto-opiskelijoita ei ole kovin
paljon laitoksen  koon suhteen, mutta niitä oli kuitenkin 8 kpl
vuonna 1998 (niin kuin ilmoitettu) ja 11 vuonna 1999.

Korjaus: Luvun korjaus riittää?